god damn i hate it when i put up a thread starter that sounds ok on initial inspection but when i come back a few hours later i realize it's utter shit
and i hate it even more that if i went and just deleted it that it will probably look like i'm asspained over not getting any responses ala mike
good on you! i've done that before, posted something i thought was fine just before bed, woke up to find that it was a mix of prose and action and the tenses were all over the place. it looked like i did it high, it was so embarrassing. i still have no idea how i fucked up that spectacularly. luckily my friends laughed it off and tagged in after i fixed it.
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and i hate it even more that if i went and just deleted it that it will probably look like i'm asspained over not getting any responses ala mike
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(Anonymous) 2012-10-14 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)no subject
but i did break down and edit it
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good luck with your log, anon.