Re: ayrt

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)
being 100% serious if your tags are as good as this outstanding bait i really would thread with you

Re: ayrt

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
i was just thinking that. this is probably more rp than most dwrpers have done all week

OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Not bad, but not as good as me. The rest of this thread is simple chaos but you stepped up. I suppose I have to credit you for that.

Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Any criticisms you can give me so I can be as good as you?

Re: PLURK PET PEEVES

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Someone you think is "problematic" playing from the same fandom you do is not a personal attack on you. This is not the first time you've thrown a little fit over someone invading "your" fandoms and making you uncomfortable by playing in a fandom that is "yours".

You're overinvested and possessive and victimizing yourself over others playing in the same fandom is frankly pathetic.

Re: PLURK PET PEEVES

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Ew, name and shame. I don't want to be playing with someone who might get super over sensitive about something they're not even involved with.

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
gsai's not banned in the sense that they're blocked from replying on rpa. it's more that anything under that ip gets deleted if the mods catch it. not the same thing at all.

Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
It's not IC. I know you are trying to be funny, but that is just not what I would do.

one singular icon of choice. Redundant adjectives.

It was a good icon, it conveyed everything that anon needed it to outside of their writing skill. Shouldn't their abilities have shown through the tag rather than the icon itself? Redundant sentences.

[Had Pretty Princess 300 Icons-chan even mentioned the icon?] What is this even doing here?

gripped their hands tighter into fists Clunky. Try "clenched their hands into fists" or "balled their hands into tight fists." "Grip" means you're holding something, it's an inappropriate verb. You are sometimes really casual about word choice.

Control plus T. They found Wankgate sitting in their recently used tabs and clicked it, the tears they were trying to keep at bay getting harder and harder to ignore. Post new comment. You allow yourself to post short sentence fragments, but then make a bloated, passive-voice sentence in between them. Control plus T. They meandered to Wankgate, sitting in their recently used tabs. They were not going to cry about this. No wet sentiments. "Post a new comment" hovered, a promise, a distraction. They clicked.

Re: PLURK PET PEEVES

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:12 pm (UTC)(link)
This is always funny when the canon itself is a problematic one

nayrt

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
In regards to what is this even doing here, it might be an html issue. I know that's how I've had parts of a tag disappear between sets of brackets.

ayrt

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
That’s the funny part. I was playing Loki

da

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:31 pm (UTC)(link)
yeah i've noticed some folks have a pretty big hate-on for loki. which is understandable from an ic perspective, because a lot of the cast has good reason to hate him, but sometimes i got the uncomfortable impression there was ic/ooc bleed going on (saw this a lot with tonys).

i will say that you really shouldn't be mixing comics canon with mcu, though, unless it's just fluff or was made mcu canon. that crit is legit.

Da

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll play with you and your single icon if you critique my shitty tags.

sorry i'm late

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
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Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 10:52 pm (UTC)(link)
"[Had Pretty Princess 300 Icons-chan even mentioned the icon?] What is this even doing here?"

Introspective thought. I usually do it a different way but I didn't want to out myself tbh.

"You are sometimes really casual about word choice."

You're right about the redundancies in my writing too, I write in a pretty loose stream-of-thought sort of way.

I like your last sentence you added, but I didn't want to make you sound fat by using "meandered". Maybe "mosey" would have worked!

Re: +1

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
too bad all the 3hs posting on bakerstreet are shit tier

Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
meander sounds fat???

Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
right? has nothing to do with fatness

Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Maybe they have meandered confused with waddled

Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I balled my nuts into ur mom

Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Introspective thought I mean what is it doing there? It's not a barb at me that hits, because ICly I wouldn't even think about this, and as a joke about my egotism or something, it's still a wiff, since I've been loud in this thread about not caring about icons. It doesn't add anything to anything. It's fat.

I like your last sentence you added,

Did you mean, "They clicked."? Because if so... ( ◡́.◡̀)(^◡^ )

Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 11:18 pm (UTC)(link)
what an uncervixable pun

Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not sure what you mean? I do stuff like that in tags all the time. Putting a stray thought or a sentence that sounds nice on its own. I think for that one specifically was because I didn't want a little dingleberry on the end or the paragraph like when this happens

[typing the tag blah blah blah

the last sentence sticks out a lil bit on the next line]

sa

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
also i said sentence but i meant this whole bit!!

"No wet sentiments. "Post a new comment" hovered, a promise, a distraction. They clicked"

Very nicely done.

Re: OP

(Anonymous) 2022-03-04 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
licks her toes as she sucks my futa cock