if you're blue, serious bit of feedback here, it would make your writing much better if you spelled the words properly and just mentioned his accent in narration when it's important. link to a video of him speaking when threading with someone for the first time if it matters that much to you.
even correctly rendered accents in dialogue can be annoying to read and yours is honestly not correct. to the point where as someone familiar with canon and very familiar with the accent it breaks immersion for me completely and i can't mentally read your posts in his voice.
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if you're blue, serious bit of feedback here, it would make your writing much better if you spelled the words properly and just mentioned his accent in narration when it's important. link to a video of him speaking when threading with someone for the first time if it matters that much to you.
even correctly rendered accents in dialogue can be annoying to read and yours is honestly not correct. to the point where as someone familiar with canon and very familiar with the accent it breaks immersion for me completely and i can't mentally read your posts in his voice.