i feel like the point is being missed here that the mun just isn't a very good writer, period. they don't have a good grasp on general flow, their narrative's flat, they were still making constant grammar fuck-ups last i checked and they just don't strike me as anything other than mediocre. not horrible, but i'm definitely not a fan either.

and when you're not a very good writer, you're going to have issues with consistency. the mun very much appears to do whatever they want with him and i'll be real them being personally obsessed with the pb really, really puts me off.

he's not our worst by far but he's definitely not an example of a good oc done even remotely well.