Re: da

(Anonymous) 2016-05-08 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)
because it's all the same sentence structure

+1

(Anonymous) 2016-05-08 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
James was hungry. He decided he'd go hunting for his food. The hunter left his home and went out with his bow and arrow to see if he could catch anything. James came across a couple of deer and decided he wanted some venison. The brunette shot the buck and followed it as it tried to escape.

That doesn't make it any more engaging.

Re: +1

(Anonymous) 2016-05-09 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I checked out by the second he in the first one and the second james in the second one.

the structure in this is horrible since it's basically the ben stein of descriptions in general.