Re: worst

(Anonymous) 2013-04-16 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
I blame Kimmie for that more than Lindsey mun, since they're new to Amat, I'm pretty sure. Another perfect example of how she ignored the crit she got back in December!

Re: worst

(Anonymous) 2013-04-16 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
are you kidding me? i'm not talking about the scene itself or whether it's ooc/ic whatever, i'm talking about the quality of the writing. lindsey's moves were all super-vague, or one-liners. you couldn't even tell if he had an orgasm at the end. it was ridiculous.

Re: worst

(Anonymous) 2013-04-16 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
No, they are just that bad.

Re: worst

(Anonymous) 2013-04-16 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
I think they're just shitty at smut. Nothing that can't be fixed with some crit and practice. I was that bad once upon a time so it can be fixed