Okay Flyboy on the off chance someone links you to wg, here's some writing tips for the next game you try to force yourself onto. All that shit with Luke goes in the personality section. History section is where he went and what he did while he was there, and he wasn't only doing Luke. You don't even MENTION him in your personality. Wangsting on a network to God isn't something he'd do. If he's asking for help he'd ask for help, not cry pointlessly about why god why god. If his experiences in Eros altered his outlooks and interests and behaviors this ALSO goes in personality and is very important to make note of. You can't have too much detail when describing CRAUs, and you have almost none beyond "Luke and Matt fucked". Talk about his likes and dislikes, his hobbies, what he does when he's not crying on the network to God, talk about his friends and relationships and for the love of tiny kittens and puppies make sure your samples match what you have in the personality section! You can't spend one line saying he has self esteem issues and then make your samples 100% emo angsty bullshit.
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