Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
https://tenebrisooc.dreamwidth.org/5000.html

The game guide and FAQ pages sure are something.

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
has this person passed 8th grade english

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 08:18 pm (UTC)(link)
their parents did their homework

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
another victim of the "add a comma where you pause" fallacy

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
oh god you're right.

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
you miserable bitches are so fucking petty

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
You're really upset your friend is getting the most minor of minor roasting on anoncomms. Grow a thicker skin.

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
"This means without needing to request, in the event other people find interest in this game and wish to reach out. Please contact us here.

Those on our friend list are welcome to invite people who are interested in the game freely for the next month, March. As long as we are informed as to who is invited."


I get what's being said, so I for some people that's all that matters. But grammatically, it sort of looks like it was written too quickly on a cell phone, lots of fragments and weird 'sentences' that aren't really sentences.

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
The above example is one thing but

"Please note that the themes of Attack/Tank/Support, is mean't to merely help you imagine how each ‘type’ technically is meant to be used. It isn’t something to follow ordinarily, but just to help you understand its conception."


"Hard Nos/Noish;
Sort of!! We want to discourage anyone trying to get too crazy with their abilities. If other players are super into it, then you should be allowed to as this as it is sandbox game. With explicit player permission you can with a few here but otherwise the rule of thumb is NO.


good luck to anyone trying to parse and understand the game info.

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)
this reads esl. the weird phrasing the random commas the meandering thought process

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-23 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
nah, this reads much more like native english speaker who doesn't think they have to learn the rules of english grammar because it just comes naturally. like the anon above pointed out, they're a pretty obvious victim of the "put a comma wherever you pause" approach, and that's a mark against them being esl, not evidence for it.

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-23 01:30 am (UTC)(link)
not to throw a wrench in your logic but i was taught the comma thing as someone who's esl

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-23 08:14 am (UTC)(link)
whereas your comment reads like you're on meth or something

are you too excited for commas or what

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-23 05:40 pm (UTC)(link)
settle down

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-23 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
"esl" "meandering thought process" ?????

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-23 10:30 am (UTC)(link)
nah that's just you

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-23 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
it doesn't really read esl so much as someone who habitually crytypes or has that kind of overexcited yelling sort of ooc tone and doesn't finish a thought before bouncing around trying to dial it back and type more 'seriously'

so basically sheep's ooc communication style

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-23 02:57 pm (UTC)(link)
She’s not ESL, trust me.

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-24 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
sheep's not esl she's just really fucking stupid

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-23 12:21 am (UTC)(link)
mean't

Re: SHEEP

(Anonymous) 2025-02-22 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Having played with Sheep before, that's exactly how I would describe her tags and her OOC communication. I don't think anyone is going to actually join this game, but if they do, good luck because her writing doesn't get clearer than this.