Tori is ridiculously pedestrian. You can't even call her "bad" because there's literally nothing to say about her. Her personality can be deconstructed to one or two simple tropes, and the way the mun talks about her behavior in terms such as "tsundere" or "yandere" just make things worse (I know a lot of muns talk about their characters like that OOC as a form of short hand, but with Lexi it only highlights how little Tori's personality goes beyond those simple templates).
i checked her journal to see if there was an hmd- there was and she was given crit for this last month (or that's the impression i got, the crit was screened and i'm assuming that was for the privacy of them.) the mun said she'd work on whatever was addressed and seemed pretty civil about it.
hopefully there will be a few changes, because the character does look like she'd be interesting if more of what was mentioned in her personality section was applied.
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(Anonymous) 2013-01-21 07:02 am (UTC)(link)annoying but just as shitty as any other shitty oc
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(Anonymous) 2013-01-21 07:19 am (UTC)(link)every tag makes me cringe, though that admittedly might just be the icons
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(Anonymous) 2013-01-21 07:23 am (UTC)(link)da
(Anonymous) 2013-01-21 08:13 am (UTC)(link)i can't even tell you if there's more wrong with her than that because it's so bad
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(Anonymous) 2013-01-21 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)Re: +1
(Anonymous) 2013-01-21 06:17 pm (UTC)(link)hopefully there will be a few changes, because the character does look like she'd be interesting if more of what was mentioned in her personality section was applied.